This term we are studying news reports and what makes them effective. Look through Kiwi Kids News or News Round and find an article that interests you.
Answer these questions about the article:
1. What is the headline of your article?
2. What are the five W's of your article?
3. What sort of tense are the words in the article? Can you give an example?
4. Is there a quote in your article? What has been said? Does it use reported or direct speech?
5. Is it written in first or third person?
Comment your answers.
1. Ice Truck Racing In America
ReplyDelete2.Who drivers what truck race when unknown where America why unknown
3. past tense:Nine off-road trucks have been racing along the ski slopes.
4.there is no Quote
5.third person!
I and Harry had fun doing this!!
Freddy and James
ReplyDeleteHeadline: Leicester win English Premier league
5 W's Who: Leicester city What: Leicester win EPL Where: NONE When: Final whistle of Tottenham vs Chelsea draw Why: Because Tottenham needed to win to try and beat Leicester in the EPL. Can't find any tense words.No Quotes.Our article is written in first person.
Q: What is the headline of your article? A: KFC creates nail polish you can eat
ReplyDeleteQ:*What are the 5 ws of your article?
Q:What sort of tense is in your article? Give an example. A: Past tense eg. Fast food giant KFC has created edible nail polish that supposedly tastes like chicken.
Is there a quote in your article? A: Yes “Fast food giant KFC has created edible nail polish that supposedly tastes like chicken.” - bbc
Is it written in first or third person? A: Third person
*Who: KFC
What: edible chicken nail polish
When :This week
where : Hong kong
Why: Probably to get money. May be a scam because BBC tried it and said it tasted like spices. Not proper KFC chicken.
What is the headline: KFC creates nail polish you can eat
ReplyDeleteWhat are the five w's:
Who: KFC
What: edible chicken nail polish.
When: This week.
Where: Hong Kong.
Why: does not say.
Third or first person: Third person.
What tense is it: Past tense.
Quote:“The spicy flavour tasted almost exactly like the paste used in KFC’s hot & spicy chicken. It definitely lingered on the tongue, but we couldn’t detect any fried chicken flavour.”
1.Worlds biggest hamburger made in US
ReplyDelete2.Who: What:Biggest hamburger When: 2013 Where: Minnesota Why:
3. Past tense. Been.
4.Yes. Philip Robertson – the Guinness Records representative at Minnesota – complimented the taste of the burger while also praising the “remarkable teamwork” involved. Reported speech.
5.Third.
Charlotte Morley and Robbie
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ReplyDelete1.book returned 68 years late
2. Auckland library,book,68 years late,Auckland woman,1948-2008
3.past tense: “She told me she was an Epsom Library member as a child, but they moved away and she accidentally took this book with her.”
4.“She told me she was an Epsom Library member as a child, but they moved away and she accidentally took this book with her.” direct speech
5. 3rd
Charlie and Jimmy
DeleteFreddy and James
ReplyDeleteheadline: Kane Williamson announced as Blackcaps captain.
5 W's Who: Kane Williamson for all formats. What: Williamson announced as Blackcaps captain. Where: NONE. When: Currently now.NONE (personal info: replacing Mcullum because he has been vice for ages.) Mostly present tense.No quotes.It is written in 3rd person.
1.Newborn panda arrives in China. 2.Who: Ai Hin,Baby panda. What: Newborn panda. When: Morning of Friday 6th May. Where: China,Shanghai. Why: Ai Hin was having a baby. 3. Past tense (was) 4. NO. 5. Third person. Lara, Sophia!
ReplyDelete1. fire man saves kitten on go pro
ReplyDelete2. who fire man Cory what save cute kitten where smoke filled burning house when ? why nice fire man
3.present:rescues.
4.no
5.third
wow! The real BBC? your article must be A-W-E-S-O-M-E !!
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ReplyDeleteHeadline: Peta the koala is on the mend after an accidents
ReplyDelete5ws:
Who: Peta the koala
What: car accident injured koala
When : Unknow
Where : western australia
Why: Unknown
Tenses: Past tense
Quotes: None
First or third person: Third
1.Cutest Hedgehog ever
ReplyDelete2.Who,Hedgehog,Carolyn Parker.What,Carolyn found Sir Hodge Huffington who is a 3 year old Hedgehog and he is her pet.when I don't know.where I don't know!
how cute was it out of ten?1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9 or 10
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DeleteFreddy and James
ReplyDeleteheadline: Blackcaps to play day night test in India. 5 W's Who: Blackcaps. What: Play day night test in India. Where: India. When:In the Blackcaps their October cricket tour.Why: people want their to be another pink ball test.In our article it uses third person. Present tense.No quotes.
Awsome!
Deleteheadline movie deal for nhs choir that beat justin bieber in charts
ReplyDeletewho nhs choir
what nhs beat justin bieber
when april
why to sing
tense:past tense
no speech
third person
by gracie and caleb
Jack and Max
ReplyDeleteTitle: Leicester city win English premier League
5'ws: Who: Leicester city.
What: Win league.
When: Last week.
Where: England.
Why: because they worked together.
Tense: Past tense.
Quotes: None.
Third person.
By Ayla and Amy
ReplyDelete1.Title:Newborn panda arrives in China!
2.5 w's: Who: A giant panda Mum and her tiny son. What: 145g baby around same weight as orange! When: Friday morning 6th May 2016. Where: China, Chengdu, capital of southwest China Sichuan Province.Why: A giant panda gave birth to a baby so small it could be in a world record book!
3.Tense: Past tense.BELOW:exhample from actual thing.
Nine-year-old giant panda "Ai Hin" has given birth to a male cub weighing 145 grams, which is about the same weight as an orange.Nine-year-old giant panda "Ai Hin" has given birth to a male cub weighing 145 grams, which is about the same weight as an orange.
4.There are no quotes.
5.This is written in third person.
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